I get creepiness from the first picture more so than the second. I think its the sky of the first one. The green colors in the sky are really nice, but I would like to see even more of the sky that color. I think it would help with the concept as well.
I am more attracted to the first image with the silhouette because I get more of a sense of death and creepiness. I think you have a great start, and I would really like to see more of the figure and ominous green sky.
The silhouetted figure is definitely one of the most successful elements of your compositions; I also really like the bottom right corner not being complete and having almost a torn look to it, helps with the "creepy" vibe.
I like the first picture, especially the figure and I feel the hard edges work. The bottom one I don't like as much, I feel like it needs a stronger focus
We need a statement to go with the image please. Nice start tho. I am not sure the silhouette needs the other image peeking thru. Love the relationship of the clouds to the figure. Fun to try to re-create reality instead of layering ala photoshop sometimes. Love that you are doing iterations, allowing the accident to happen. Lock in the process, get the grade out of the equation, is a smart move. Then it is easier to just relax and let the image happen. Chance is part of the whole. Right now i really like how the figure brings the canvas white into the composition. plays with different spatial and conceptual realities as well. great start.
I like the light silhouetted figure in the first picture, I think that's something worth exploring more!
ReplyDeleteI get creepiness from the first picture more so than the second. I think its the sky of the first one. The green colors in the sky are really nice, but I would like to see even more of the sky that color. I think it would help with the concept as well.
ReplyDeleteI am more attracted to the first image with the silhouette because I get more of a sense of death and creepiness. I think you have a great start, and I would really like to see more of the figure and ominous green sky.
ReplyDeleteThe silhouetted figure is definitely one of the most successful elements of your compositions; I also really like the bottom right corner not being complete and having almost a torn look to it, helps with the "creepy" vibe.
ReplyDeleteI like the first picture, especially the figure and I feel the hard edges work. The bottom one I don't like as much, I feel like it needs a stronger focus
ReplyDeleteHi Sarah
ReplyDeleteWe need a statement to go with the image please. Nice start tho. I am not sure the silhouette needs the other image peeking thru. Love the relationship of the clouds to the figure. Fun to try to re-create reality instead of layering ala photoshop sometimes. Love that you are doing iterations, allowing the accident to happen. Lock in the process, get the grade out of the equation, is a smart move. Then it is easier to just relax and let the image happen. Chance is part of the whole. Right now i really like how the figure brings the canvas white into the composition. plays with different spatial and conceptual realities as well. great start.